There was a moment this long weekend when I thought of calling Heritage Web Solutions (see links in Design assignment) and offering them the one hundred and ninety nine dollars to repair my three days of design experiments. "Here! You take these and have at it," I wanted to say to any 1-800 operator who would answer. But perfecting these designs is too much a challenge to pass up, and I have some ideas as to what needs to be done. The issue is can I execute given my skill level in the time remaining.
And so as the turtle stumbles forward and the finish line looms (and I view the rabbits racing ahead and admire their handiwork), I decided to plot my course to the finish line. Looking at my attempts at designing six successive pages that each have a period motif, it is clear there are a myriad of repairs, additions, and restarts that I need to accomplish in the span of the next 24 days. And I certainly welcome any critiques more salient than those I have self-inflicted in the "self-help" outline below (in no particular order of priority):
1. Should I carry the home page banner picture across all six "March" pages. Envision a sort of black and white faded version of what now appears on the March Leaders page at the top and bottom of each page? Too much? Would it interfere? Maybe we should try one and see if it hints at the unity I desire.
2. The Home Page title needs to be brought into the picture and I am debating whether to eliminate the space above (or as in #1 above devote it to a consistent header with or without a quote (or just eliminate altogether). There is a side of me that likes the feint quotes. But we need to work through some larger issues first.
3. There are CRAP issues all over the place and they are exacerbated on IE 6 (of course). The March Leaders page is one egregious example; but there are others. My favorite is what happens to the text on the Vietnam March page (about which much more will be said later) on IE 6. You have to scroll way down the page to see the beginning. VALIDATE VALIDATE VALIDATE: Have not validated anything so I need to save a couple days just for that horrid exercise and pray that I can make the necessary corrections.
4. Now as for the primitive efforts at design (particularly as I peruse the Zen Garden or the retro theater and realize what is possible):
Coxey: The burnished image worked out pretty well and in my judgment it was worth it to return to those expensive fonts and use the photo shop to capture them. This is a step forward. But the font carried into the text doesn't work (not easily readable). Moreover there needs to be a background color that lends a period design. So page in progress and I welcome comments.
Suffrage: Really worked on this one and colorized it to match the purple and gold colors that were emblematic of the 1913 suffrage March. However, the colors might be a bit tawny (?) and i need to extend the background color to cover the links. And what about the fonts? This is a good start but can use some smoothing.
And here is a general question: should I insert some posters or other emblematic art into the text to further periodize it' or will this simply create more clutter. Perhaps this can be done in the links section of each page. For example here is a poster from the Vietnam March that could be subtly inserted. The issue is where?
Bonus: Have not done a thing with this page yet, but it does remind me of the bare simplicity and minimalist nature of the original site design which I am partial to but only because perhaps too may brain cells have died or been over stimulated! But it is functional and I think Tufte would like it.
Negro: This continues to be my magic page. But I need to change the headline of the photo shopped text image to match the vignetted image and bring the color across the entire page. Plus the color gray is not quite matched between picture and text so I need to attend to that. And again there is white space between picture and text so I need to work this out .
Civil Rights: Bet you didn't know that A. Philip Randolph approach MLK in 1863? This is symptomatic of many grammatical and textual errors that need to be corrected sooner than later. Free at Last with exclamation and then no exclamation. Boy, 35 years in corporate America and this is my attention to detail! But this page has potential. The Civil Rights title needs to be centered in the reflecting pond. And what should the text look like that would distinguish it from the next site ten years later?
Vietnam: Here my primitivism is on full display. I had the notion to do a "flowers" backdrop (we were the children with flowers in our hair); I think this should become a feint backdrop to the text (wallpaper!); so I will work on that in the photo shop. Again, as for fonts this plagues me with the last two sites and I need to think long and hard about design possibilities.
5. The March Leaders Page is new and I sort of like the way it links to Wikipedia in the true spirit of open source media. And I am developing a press page which is hidden from view (which frankly should be the case for tall the above).
6. Although, according to Jakob Nielsen, my links might actually make the cut. They are clear and accessible and not scrunched together. I think I pass the Nielsen test for links though, as indicated, they sort of stand out on these early attempts at stylized design.
So folks, I lay it all out here in its ugly developmental stage to invite your very good ideas and insights. Have at it. The turtle needs some miracles to happen in the next 24 days. I don't see any of you rabbits napping!